blog revishion - blog 11-

When i first started to paddle along shore i could see the giant flames,and i could hear the ululations from the boys on the island. At first i saw 10 bathing in the pond like thing then more come out from the jungle 50 or 60 boys all by them selfs. When i got to the island and truly saw all these boys ageing from 6-13. I could not visualize all these boys by them self .I cried who is your leader. One small boy came up to me his hat was covered in stains and rips.  His faced looked like it was sunburned for life face. He cowered over towards me. Like he had not seen a adult in years he did not know what to expect from a civilized human.
I aksed to the boy infront of me who was stuck glaring at my boat.
" what is going on here is this some kind of war?"
" yes two of our men have already died!"
I wanted him to elaborate about how they got here how they died and so forth. But i knew that was not such a good idea i knew i had to get these boys off this island and fast.
I looked out into the forest and two more boys heaved them selfs out to where i was standing

blog revishion -Jacks clan blog 10-

When we woke up. Piggy was whimpering and complaning for what seemed like a life time. We thought that we have to get his specs back. Ralph even wanted us to go get his specs. So maybe he would finally stop complaning we both thought. We started to walk to castle rock i said to ralph that we are only going to get his glasses and not for a fight or anything remember that. When we saw there hide out the hill to get up it looked miles long but truly wasn't.
"who goes there?" yelled roger
" you can perfectly see us roger!" said ralph
Ralph blew the conch and then the savages started to become visible one by one.
We looked up and saw a huge rock come out from above. We also saw roger there holding a lever for a rock to come crashing down once more.
"i am calling a meeting about piggy's glasses and the fire. where is jack!" yelled ralph
While ralph said that jack apeared simultaniusly.
"go back to your part of the island this is our part!" said Jack
" but you stole piggy's specs we just want what belongs to us.!" said ralph
jack and ralph now got in a verbel fight and then he got mad.
"get them! tie em up!"
we both looked at eachother and to hunters grasped our shoulder and puled us up the mountain. They tied us up we pushed and shoved agaisnst eachother to see if the rope would give any slack but it was hopeless. then i spoted piggy walking in the maner of a penguin and then got hit by a rock and fell to the ground. Bleeding and falling down the rocks. We thought that now there was no way that we will ever be saved or come up with a way to live. Jack made us be part of this group we didnt want to but there was no way out of this one. We were part of the savages now!

trail prepration

For the trail of Jack Merridew i am playing the role of jack.

Chapter 1&2 :

- we crashed on to the island and me and the boys from the choir from my school heard a loud noise.We followed the noise and found ralph and piggy besides a shell thing that they called a conch i just thought of it as a stupid shell. Then later along we voted who should be the leader and ralph one because he blew the conch i only got 12 votes and became the head of the hunters. We also ran up the mountain with piggys glasses and started a fire.

Chapter 3&4:

-we went on our first hunt to kill but we did not get it but we went back and maurice and the others that we sent back the other time helped us. we brought back the kill. Cooked it and had a great feast.

Chapter 5,6&7 :

- ralph calls a meating about our lack in work and productivaty. Then a litlun mentions the beast and since we al were so afraid of it we went on a hunt for it me ralph and roger. We saw it and ran at a steadfast pass down the miountain.

Chapter 8&9:

- i called a meeting because ralph made fun of not only me but of my hunters. But that is not all but also i needed to become leader but they did not vote in my favor but i started my own group any ways. Then had a party for the pig we had killed. the party got out of control and rain started to fall lightening started to strike and then we did our dance as simon crawled out into the party and there he went to the heavens above. When we got back we planed out a plan to steal the conch and Piggys glasses and that is exactly what we had done that night.

10&11 :

- i was out hunting when piggy was killed and when i came back sam n eric were both tied up.

Then we made a fire and it caught the whole forest on fire, then that is when the officer came and saved us from dieing on the island.

blog 11- there cry for civilization

When i first started to paddle along shore i could see the giant flames,and i could hear the ululations from the boys on the island. At first i saw 30 bathing in the pond like thing then more come out from the jungle 50 or 60 boys all by them selfs. when i got to the island and truly saw all these boys ageing from 6-13. I could not visualize all these boys by them self i cried who is your leader. one small boy came up to me his hat was covered in stains and rips and his faced looked like it was sunburned for life face completly cower in frekles. He cowered over towards me like he had not seen a adult in years he did not know what to expect from a civilized human.

i aksed to the boy infront of me who was stuck glaring at my boat.

" what is going on here is this some kind of war?"

" yes two of our men have already died!"

I wanted him to elaborate about how they got here how they died and so forth. But i knew that was not such a good idea i knew i had to get these boys off this island and fast.

i looked out into the forest and two more boys heaved them selfs out to where i was standing.

jacks clan

When we woke up piggy was whimpering and complaning for what seemed like a life time. We thought that we have to get his specs back. Ralph even wanted us to go get his specs so maybe he would finally stop complaning we both thought. We started to walk to castle rock  i said to ralph that we are only going to get his glasses and not for a fight or anything remember that. when we saw there hide out the hill to get up it looked miles long but truly wasn't. 

"who goes there?" yelled roger 

" you can perfectly see us roger!" said ralph

Ralph blew the conch and then the savages started to become visible one by one.

we looked up and saw a huge rock come out from above. We also saw roger there holding a lever for a rock to come crashing down once more.

"i am calling a meeting about piggy's glasses and the fire. where is jack!" yelled ralph

While ralph said that jack apeared simultanius.

"go back to your part of the island this is our part!" said Jack

" but you stole piggy's specs we just want what belongs to us.!" said ralph

jack and ralph now got in a verbel fight and then he got mad.

"get them! tie em up!"

we both looked at eachother and to hunters grasped our shoulder and puled us up the mountain and tied us up we pushed and shoved agaisnst eachother to see if the rope would give any slack but it was hopeless. then i spoted piggy walking in the maner of a penguin and then got hit by a rock and fell to the ground. bleeding and falling down the rocks.

jack made us be part of this group we didnt want to but there was no way out of this one.

we were part of the savages now!

sucks to your as mar

Ralph made fun of me for wanting to send a letter to my aunt while we looked out to the phosphorescence. I got nervous and started to wipe my spec's. Me and ralph kept sugesting small hints about what had happened to simon last night. but ralph finally said it was  murder. 

"No it was not i insited it was only a acident how dare him for crawling up on us like that. "

"But we were on the out side weren't we."

" yea and the storm the lighting we wern't being right!"

We should not feel bad because we were not part of it don't worry. I thought to my self that jack is losing it he is giving in to the beast and to jacks power i can not stand for this. 

"Ralph how are we going to keep the fire going?''

"What oh the fire we will split in to groups samneric and me and you one will atend the fire and the othere will be getting wood."

" but my asthma i can't haul logs!" 

"Sucks to your asthma!''

But now how are we going to keep the fire going when my specs are gone. I shudder when i think about jack and what they will do to us. Last night was horible my face was smothered in hay and dirt when they left. I was so scared i layed on the ground and had a asthma atack.

i could hear Ralph's stifled scream when he got hit in the pill's. when he was fighting i saw him gesticulating by using his ands and punching jack as he thought.

finally free

Trickling  sweet like my throat has been cut and the blood is spraying out. I was so thirsty i could barley tell that jack's moral corruption was right in front of me and telling me things i was all ready aware of.  He was saying that the beast can not be killed it is part of us the dark instinctual part of us. civilization has no control over you boys anymore you have giving into the the rules of the beast, and now we are going to do you in.

when i woke up i remembered my dream with the beast or was. But i started to run up the hill as fast as i could to look for the beast as the sun was setting. So i ran even fast, I was 3/4 up the hill when i saw a blue parchute pulling a body around and i ran to it and saw the parchute fill up with air and sway the dead body back and forth again and agian. Then i finaly decided to untie the body so he can decay normally. I was so happy to tell the others that there was no beast. so i ran down the hill at down the hill at a steadfast pace. I saw and heard the boys haveing fun so i ran to thru the back and heard them chanting '' kill the beast! cut his throat! spill his blood!'' 

I ran out to great them with my great news and the all ran towards me and i yelled the beast isn't real there is a dead body c'mon guys. at first i thought they were excited but i realized they wanted my blood when they held up there speers.  The  beast isn't real they cam at me and every one was on top of me my screams were tremulous. They wouldn't bealive me and i looked at the sky for my last sight of nature.

 

blog 7

"kill the pig! cut his throat! bash him in!" 

I ran to that sound to find the boys yelling that huddled in a circle i push and manovered my way in the circle to find robert in the middle huddled in a little ball. He was crying and Sniveling for help. 

" help! stop! please!'' Robert shouted contuinsly.

i could not bare but not to see this so i went out of the circle. Then jumped right back in the infinite boys wold not let me in i pushed and shoved as much as i could but nothing there was to many. When i saw jack he gave me a incredulous look and i knew i must chant along if i want to be respected so i went with it and i heard my self saying with the crowd!

''Kill him KIll him!"

jack picked up his spear and was trying to intimadte robert he was still curled up and i was hoping for this to stop as my hand waved slowly and glided through he warm wind hiting my hand while it was in a fist formation ready to punch.

i looked forward and saw jack i looked left and at a faint distance sam n eric and on my right there was ralph cheering like jack also holding a speer. i could not comprehend this he was our leader but he was stuping down to jacks level. i couldn't decide weither he was doing this because he wanted to be respected by the hunters or because he really wanted this to happen. I i always wanted him to be leader but now my views are diffrent.

I thought to my self how lucky i was to not be robert. As the fight died down i felt the urge of killing a pig not robert but a pig. i was becoming infuriated.

we continued up the hill going by the jungle dodging the sharp vines hiding very covertly in the grating jungle. after a while we some boys started to converse about piggy which lead to them leaving. There was me ralph and jack we stood there blunderingly waiting to be spoted but nothing. The we continued up the hill which seemed infinite i wanted to go back to the beach but that was a sagely idea so i went with them until we had finally got to the fire and we stood there for a while. we sat down on a big log and i heard a noise and so did ralph but not jack. then i saw it the beast but jack and ralph started yelling at me  knew he would be uncompromising. but then i made them go look with me and we went up the hill further sweating and panting like dogs even thought it was dark. we saw a figure but no one said anything but we all knew it was the beast. then it moved further up and ralph said it was a ape while i was running nimble down to the beach and jumping over bushes and grubes it felt likeas if i was flying down a hill.

blog quest (piggy's interview)

Me: 

Hello Piggy i will obviously be asking you some questions to day about your experience on the island and how you look back on that great adventure as a 76 year old compared to what you thought back then.

Piggy:

Oh of course young sir ask away.

Me:

Son when you first got on the island what where the thoughts going on thru your head? What actions did you take? Did you follow the rules of society or were you lazy at the groups expense?

Piggy:

"Well when i first go on the island is was  unconscious so i did not know what was happening until ralph woke me up by running by me at a nimble yet loud pace. so i woke up but i was still not with the game. As some would say so then me and him ended up on the same part of the beach and we mingled for a bit. Then it was when he found the silly old conch as we thought but. in a couple of minutes i realized there where othere boys on that plane so i told him to blow the conch."

"ralph why don't you blow the conch i can't on a count to me asthma me mom's said not to so i won't." 

" Then we did and it worked boys kept apearing out of the grating forest and i was taking names while everyone else was being lazy. Right there shows that mostly everyone was be lazy at my expense.

Me: 

Oh wow i thought you would be a good leader and how do u feel about ralph being the leader or who would you rather be the leader?

Piggy:

Well defantly i would ralph be the leader. Jack is bloody hell to deal with he does not respect any one not even the conch. But if any one could be the leader i would love to be the leader i would have done things a lot more scientific and logically. But no one really likes me and people don't let me talk every one is always "SHUT UP PIGGY" and what not.

Me: 

Since the start where you were taking names you have been nice to the little ones do you have little siblings?

Piggy:

well i am a only child but. I know how they are feeling because i am a out sider and so i know how it feels to be left out. I also feel the same way as the littluns most of the time, like how they want to be a hunter and admire jack for being a hunter and so do i. I admire his physically

able to hunt and such but i feel hope less because i can't go with them on a count of me asthma.

the little boys also want to be told and controled by the bigger boys, they want them to make laws and such but they and i are frigthened of them.

Me:

Oh well thank you and that was the daniel islas shows we will back soon to interview anothere star jack during a later date.

symbol's blog -6

The conch

the conch is a sing of power,order,and rules within the boy's even though it is losing power i think this is the thing that will pull the boy's together at the end. The conch also represents hope because when ralph blows the conch everyone unites and comes together but if the conch falls i think jacks clan will ignore the calling of the conch.

Piggy's glasses

These glasses represent science and intulectual brain power whoever is wearing them can see the boys on the island clearly, they can also see people for who they really are. but now that the left lense is broken and piggy has to see through a broken lense tells us that the boys on the island are going further and further away from science and intulectual power.

The signal fire

the signal fire is hope for all the boys for civilization for a chance of being rescued. The fire is the one and only road or conection to civilization and by letting the fire go out that road was closed and ralph has lost his hope and is amazed at how iresponsible the other boys can be.

The beast

The beast never is the same because it is only a figment of the boys imagintation, first the groupd thought it was an animal,then a sea creature, then a animal the apears out of thin air,

each child's version is defrent some are scared of jack,some are scared of the others, some are scared of them selfs but they all are difrent

blog -5 setting writing

Bobby and i awoke to fire sirens and police men knocking on peoples doors and evacuating us me and him ran out side to the smell of heavy smoke when we toke a breath we would cough heavily.
we looked up at the sky to see nothing but huge condense clouds we could barley see 20 feet ahead of us. so we ran as fast as we could back in side of my house got my dogs and turned the sprinklers on. When we opened the door out side we immediately could feel the smoke we were inhaling. All i could hear was the sound of 20 fire engines and my dogs barking and our sprinklers going of. I was scared how we would get down to some where safe because our parents where at a pool close by but they where not here.
"dude should we go we have been waiting for a while now." said Bobby
" no lets stay for five more minutes!'' i said
max and mache where on my left side and weirly was on my right side and bobby was carying bellow since he could barley walk any more.
"for get it lets go before it gets to close!"
Bobby picked Bellow up and we started to run down the hill but we could not run long the smoke was to heavy me and him started to walk and he put Bellow down. we where about 1/4 down the hill and i saw a five more fire trucks driving up the hill they looked brown to me even though they are red but the smoke changed the colors of everything. when we got further down the hill i saw 3 fire men ataching a hose to the fire hidrent i could see there yellow suites covered in smoke and debree from the fire.
" daniel do you just want to cut thru the fense?"
"no lets just go to the highway and go to the mini mart!"
Me and bobby heard my mom driving fast up the hill and coming to a skiding stop.
"GET IN COME ON HURRY UP!"
we piled in the car and put all four of the dogs and me and booby in the car. my mom kept driving up the hil faster then i have ever seen her drive be fore and we meet up with kellen,hunter,ryan,sara,madison, and some random dog we found on the street, we all piled in my mom's minivan and it felt like when all those clowns fit in a bug thats how it felt like.we went further up the hill and saw it on fire and a house aswell and. The we ran into a rode block so we turned around and went to the mini mart.

blog-4 jacks ignorence

'' piggy do you think we will be able to control them because i cant imagne what the implications would be if we didn't ?''

i first saw a big grey blob i though it was just a mirage but as it came closer and closer the image came to me i let out a big shrill " A BOAT A BOAT!" i looked at simon and i saw a incredulous look on his face with a big smile we nimble up the mountain. Until we could see the signal fire but we never go to that point of the mountain. So when we arrived at the signal fire me and simon saw that it was out the fire was all ash and was dispersing very little smoke barely enough to notice it. me and him quickly started to try and start it again with the embers that were left on the fire. and i looked over at simon whimpering and quivering at the top of a rock. then i ran over to comfort simon as jack and all the hunters chanting.

" kill her slit her throat!"

and again and again

and i could not think of the gyrations the pig made when they stabed it with the sharp barbs.

" Jack i told you to keep the fire going!"

" we got meat aren't you happy?'

" am i happy since your ignorance let out the fire we are not saved a boat went bye and we should be on that but u didn't keep the fire going!"

'but we got meat isn't that a great acomplish meant."

" why don't you get this it is not about the meat it is that you let out the fire and now we are not on that boat!''

" and jack please stop being so malevolent about killing and your blood thurst why do you have such a drive for killing and blood you are like a war monger.

" it is a erg we need meat so i gather it we will need to know how to.

" well don't let that erg get out of control more than it all ready is"

"piggy give me your specs"

'' no "

jack smacked his specs and they flew through the air off his face and broke one lens i felt very sad and angry at the same time like punching jack right now there just was a erg but i kept it back so i can still be the leader and have peoples respect.

" your a preposterous person he needed his specs he can not see with out them specs"

" but we can just make a new fire and wait for a new boat and in the mean while we have meat"

" that is competly irrelevant to what we are talking about i am saying if you kept the fire going we would finally be out of this place who cares about the bloddy meat!" jack finnaly started to calm down and implied of being sorry and told piggy.

" I'm sorry about the whole fire thing"

jack started to look around and he saw a opalescence of a boat or a big pond. Where there never was before but then he claimed it was a river and finally the sun moved on and the mirage went away.

i wanted to say it but i think it will scare piggy but being saved now is a irrelevance so we should not worry about it any more now. Is the time to unit the groups we must we need to to make a civilaztion.

blog-3 meat i need

I kneel, Getting ready to lounge towards the  inscrutable herd of pigs moving at a uncatchble speed.  so i ran as nimble as i could after them and i got closer and closer to them but the five feet between me and the closet feet felt like a million miles apart. I tried dodging the grating tendrill's that fell from festoon trees. i kept runing after the herd of pigs and i was getting closer and closer untill i ran into a barb from a tree  and then i gave out a yelp. to never see those pig's again. Then I  decided to find my way home i turned around in a 360 degree turn and stopped when i saw the glimmer from the sea. I came home to see 2 hut's being built and when ralph saw me he had a bewildered look on his face as if he was angry with me. then i asked him where were the hut's. Then he said 

" all the boy's have been playing on the beach and it has only been me and simon all day working on the hut's where is the pig?" 

simon gave  me a furtive look. 

" i almost got the pig's but they are to fast i didn't catch them but i will"

''don't worry we have plenty of fruits."said ralph 

'' no i must catch a pig i think they are further in the mountain i will get one!" 

" stop being flaunting about killing pigs untill u actually get some meat!" said ralph 

then i went towards the warm lagoon and saw simon run off i tried to run  after him but i gave up and went back to the to huts that they made. 

" ralph we need to have a meeting about this we need hunters and hut builders so we must have a meeting to discuss this!''

" i know but they will not listen to us all they do is play and have fun in the beach." said ralph 

" we just have to be oppressive and they will have to listen to us!" 

blog 2 The fire of hope

I walked up slowly and carefully. While grasping the conch as if it was my life  the other kids nimble up the mountain with a swift and smooth movement. When the boy's got to the top of the mountain i was about have way and i started to pant like a dog. But i saw the boy's gather warped wood and put in a triangluar shape but could not start a fire. when i got there the sun made a bright glance in my eyes and i shut my eyes from the bright sun and. That second jack ripped my spectacles off my face. The i could see ralph and the others slightly tilt my glasses so the sun's heat was magnified. Then i saw a some smoke and it quickly turned into a fire with the boys could barley keep it maintained with out it catching the whole island on fire. Then ralph gave me my spectacles back and when i put them back on i glared at him giving me a scornfully look  and having my spectacles back gave me a irresistible erg of power i must do something or this fire is going to get out of hand. since i had the conch i thought i had the power to speak but every  time i told them some thing all they said was

 " shut up piggy."

 "shut up fatty."

 "shut up" 

But i didn't i keep on trying to stop the fire but they all thought it was a fire of hope they thought as long as the fire is going there is hope for civilization.  I tried to be officious but they would not listen no matter what. Then my spectacles blur up again as the boys make a tumult and i see the orange fire spred to a tree and i say

 " there needs to be more order in this place or we will fall apart"

blog 1 who has the power

The fat boy vainly yelled at the kid in front of him while they both clambered on the shore towards a  a big warm lagoon   where they both swam and showered off in. Then  the fat boy found a conch and they both  speculated an idea on how they can gather the other boys from the island but the fat boy was jumbling his ideas on how he ended up on this island and where they the only ones on the island what happened to the pilot where are we? the fat boy asked the others boys name and he said ralph and then ralph asked the fat boy of his name and he said it while he became paloor and started to quiver  i said piggy but please don't tell any one  ralph made a clamour of noise while he was laughing at his name when ralph blew the conch little kids started to apearing ouy of the grating forest minutes  of the first blow of the conch but he kept on making the sound and they kept interposed between our conversation and asking what we are doing here how did we get here a little boy simon even brought  me a cocunt and i devoured it so fast because i was hungry. more and more kids apeared behind the grating forest ntill there were at least 40 kids and they where acting in a decourus and indidgnation  the kids made a strident sound arguing over the  the leader but i think that piggy should be the leader because he is the most intalectual