blog -5 setting writing

Bobby and i awoke to fire sirens and police men knocking on peoples doors and evacuating us me and him ran out side to the smell of heavy smoke when we toke a breath we would cough heavily.
we looked up at the sky to see nothing but huge condense clouds we could barley see 20 feet ahead of us. so we ran as fast as we could back in side of my house got my dogs and turned the sprinklers on. When we opened the door out side we immediately could feel the smoke we were inhaling. All i could hear was the sound of 20 fire engines and my dogs barking and our sprinklers going of. I was scared how we would get down to some where safe because our parents where at a pool close by but they where not here.
"dude should we go we have been waiting for a while now." said Bobby
" no lets stay for five more minutes!'' i said
max and mache where on my left side and weirly was on my right side and bobby was carying bellow since he could barley walk any more.
"for get it lets go before it gets to close!"
Bobby picked Bellow up and we started to run down the hill but we could not run long the smoke was to heavy me and him started to walk and he put Bellow down. we where about 1/4 down the hill and i saw a five more fire trucks driving up the hill they looked brown to me even though they are red but the smoke changed the colors of everything. when we got further down the hill i saw 3 fire men ataching a hose to the fire hidrent i could see there yellow suites covered in smoke and debree from the fire.
" daniel do you just want to cut thru the fense?"
"no lets just go to the highway and go to the mini mart!"
Me and bobby heard my mom driving fast up the hill and coming to a skiding stop.
"GET IN COME ON HURRY UP!"
we piled in the car and put all four of the dogs and me and booby in the car. my mom kept driving up the hil faster then i have ever seen her drive be fore and we meet up with kellen,hunter,ryan,sara,madison, and some random dog we found on the street, we all piled in my mom's minivan and it felt like when all those clowns fit in a bug thats how it felt like.we went further up the hill and saw it on fire and a house aswell and. The we ran into a rode block so we turned around and went to the mini mart.