blog revishion - blog 11-

When i first started to paddle along shore i could see the giant flames,and i could hear the ululations from the boys on the island. At first i saw 10 bathing in the pond like thing then more come out from the jungle 50 or 60 boys all by them selfs. When i got to the island and truly saw all these boys ageing from 6-13. I could not visualize all these boys by them self .I cried who is your leader. One small boy came up to me his hat was covered in stains and rips.  His faced looked like it was sunburned for life face. He cowered over towards me. Like he had not seen a adult in years he did not know what to expect from a civilized human.
I aksed to the boy infront of me who was stuck glaring at my boat.
" what is going on here is this some kind of war?"
" yes two of our men have already died!"
I wanted him to elaborate about how they got here how they died and so forth. But i knew that was not such a good idea i knew i had to get these boys off this island and fast.
I looked out into the forest and two more boys heaved them selfs out to where i was standing

blog revishion -Jacks clan blog 10-

When we woke up. Piggy was whimpering and complaning for what seemed like a life time. We thought that we have to get his specs back. Ralph even wanted us to go get his specs. So maybe he would finally stop complaning we both thought. We started to walk to castle rock i said to ralph that we are only going to get his glasses and not for a fight or anything remember that. When we saw there hide out the hill to get up it looked miles long but truly wasn't.
"who goes there?" yelled roger
" you can perfectly see us roger!" said ralph
Ralph blew the conch and then the savages started to become visible one by one.
We looked up and saw a huge rock come out from above. We also saw roger there holding a lever for a rock to come crashing down once more.
"i am calling a meeting about piggy's glasses and the fire. where is jack!" yelled ralph
While ralph said that jack apeared simultaniusly.
"go back to your part of the island this is our part!" said Jack
" but you stole piggy's specs we just want what belongs to us.!" said ralph
jack and ralph now got in a verbel fight and then he got mad.
"get them! tie em up!"
we both looked at eachother and to hunters grasped our shoulder and puled us up the mountain. They tied us up we pushed and shoved agaisnst eachother to see if the rope would give any slack but it was hopeless. then i spoted piggy walking in the maner of a penguin and then got hit by a rock and fell to the ground. Bleeding and falling down the rocks. We thought that now there was no way that we will ever be saved or come up with a way to live. Jack made us be part of this group we didnt want to but there was no way out of this one. We were part of the savages now!

trail prepration

For the trail of Jack Merridew i am playing the role of jack.

Chapter 1&2 :

- we crashed on to the island and me and the boys from the choir from my school heard a loud noise.We followed the noise and found ralph and piggy besides a shell thing that they called a conch i just thought of it as a stupid shell. Then later along we voted who should be the leader and ralph one because he blew the conch i only got 12 votes and became the head of the hunters. We also ran up the mountain with piggys glasses and started a fire.

Chapter 3&4:

-we went on our first hunt to kill but we did not get it but we went back and maurice and the others that we sent back the other time helped us. we brought back the kill. Cooked it and had a great feast.

Chapter 5,6&7 :

- ralph calls a meating about our lack in work and productivaty. Then a litlun mentions the beast and since we al were so afraid of it we went on a hunt for it me ralph and roger. We saw it and ran at a steadfast pass down the miountain.

Chapter 8&9:

- i called a meeting because ralph made fun of not only me but of my hunters. But that is not all but also i needed to become leader but they did not vote in my favor but i started my own group any ways. Then had a party for the pig we had killed. the party got out of control and rain started to fall lightening started to strike and then we did our dance as simon crawled out into the party and there he went to the heavens above. When we got back we planed out a plan to steal the conch and Piggys glasses and that is exactly what we had done that night.

10&11 :

- i was out hunting when piggy was killed and when i came back sam n eric were both tied up.

Then we made a fire and it caught the whole forest on fire, then that is when the officer came and saved us from dieing on the island.

blog 11- there cry for civilization

When i first started to paddle along shore i could see the giant flames,and i could hear the ululations from the boys on the island. At first i saw 30 bathing in the pond like thing then more come out from the jungle 50 or 60 boys all by them selfs. when i got to the island and truly saw all these boys ageing from 6-13. I could not visualize all these boys by them self i cried who is your leader. one small boy came up to me his hat was covered in stains and rips and his faced looked like it was sunburned for life face completly cower in frekles. He cowered over towards me like he had not seen a adult in years he did not know what to expect from a civilized human.

i aksed to the boy infront of me who was stuck glaring at my boat.

" what is going on here is this some kind of war?"

" yes two of our men have already died!"

I wanted him to elaborate about how they got here how they died and so forth. But i knew that was not such a good idea i knew i had to get these boys off this island and fast.

i looked out into the forest and two more boys heaved them selfs out to where i was standing.

jacks clan

When we woke up piggy was whimpering and complaning for what seemed like a life time. We thought that we have to get his specs back. Ralph even wanted us to go get his specs so maybe he would finally stop complaning we both thought. We started to walk to castle rock  i said to ralph that we are only going to get his glasses and not for a fight or anything remember that. when we saw there hide out the hill to get up it looked miles long but truly wasn't. 

"who goes there?" yelled roger 

" you can perfectly see us roger!" said ralph

Ralph blew the conch and then the savages started to become visible one by one.

we looked up and saw a huge rock come out from above. We also saw roger there holding a lever for a rock to come crashing down once more.

"i am calling a meeting about piggy's glasses and the fire. where is jack!" yelled ralph

While ralph said that jack apeared simultanius.

"go back to your part of the island this is our part!" said Jack

" but you stole piggy's specs we just want what belongs to us.!" said ralph

jack and ralph now got in a verbel fight and then he got mad.

"get them! tie em up!"

we both looked at eachother and to hunters grasped our shoulder and puled us up the mountain and tied us up we pushed and shoved agaisnst eachother to see if the rope would give any slack but it was hopeless. then i spoted piggy walking in the maner of a penguin and then got hit by a rock and fell to the ground. bleeding and falling down the rocks.

jack made us be part of this group we didnt want to but there was no way out of this one.

we were part of the savages now!

sucks to your as mar

Ralph made fun of me for wanting to send a letter to my aunt while we looked out to the phosphorescence. I got nervous and started to wipe my spec's. Me and ralph kept sugesting small hints about what had happened to simon last night. but ralph finally said it was  murder. 

"No it was not i insited it was only a acident how dare him for crawling up on us like that. "

"But we were on the out side weren't we."

" yea and the storm the lighting we wern't being right!"

We should not feel bad because we were not part of it don't worry. I thought to my self that jack is losing it he is giving in to the beast and to jacks power i can not stand for this. 

"Ralph how are we going to keep the fire going?''

"What oh the fire we will split in to groups samneric and me and you one will atend the fire and the othere will be getting wood."

" but my asthma i can't haul logs!" 

"Sucks to your asthma!''

But now how are we going to keep the fire going when my specs are gone. I shudder when i think about jack and what they will do to us. Last night was horible my face was smothered in hay and dirt when they left. I was so scared i layed on the ground and had a asthma atack.

i could hear Ralph's stifled scream when he got hit in the pill's. when he was fighting i saw him gesticulating by using his ands and punching jack as he thought.

finally free

Trickling  sweet like my throat has been cut and the blood is spraying out. I was so thirsty i could barley tell that jack's moral corruption was right in front of me and telling me things i was all ready aware of.  He was saying that the beast can not be killed it is part of us the dark instinctual part of us. civilization has no control over you boys anymore you have giving into the the rules of the beast, and now we are going to do you in.

when i woke up i remembered my dream with the beast or was. But i started to run up the hill as fast as i could to look for the beast as the sun was setting. So i ran even fast, I was 3/4 up the hill when i saw a blue parchute pulling a body around and i ran to it and saw the parchute fill up with air and sway the dead body back and forth again and agian. Then i finaly decided to untie the body so he can decay normally. I was so happy to tell the others that there was no beast. so i ran down the hill at down the hill at a steadfast pace. I saw and heard the boys haveing fun so i ran to thru the back and heard them chanting '' kill the beast! cut his throat! spill his blood!'' 

I ran out to great them with my great news and the all ran towards me and i yelled the beast isn't real there is a dead body c'mon guys. at first i thought they were excited but i realized they wanted my blood when they held up there speers.  The  beast isn't real they cam at me and every one was on top of me my screams were tremulous. They wouldn't bealive me and i looked at the sky for my last sight of nature.