when i woke up i remembered my dream with the beast or was. But i started to run up the hill as fast as i could to look for the beast as the sun was setting. So i ran even fast, I was 3/4 up the hill when i saw a blue parchute pulling a body around and i ran to it and saw the parchute fill up with air and sway the dead body back and forth again and agian. Then i finaly decided to untie the body so he can decay normally. I was so happy to tell the others that there was no beast. so i ran down the hill at down the hill at a steadfast pace. I saw and heard the boys haveing fun so i ran to thru the back and heard them chanting '' kill the beast! cut his throat! spill his blood!''
I ran out to great them with my great news and the all ran towards me and i yelled the beast isn't real there is a dead body c'mon guys. at first i thought they were excited but i realized they wanted my blood when they held up there speers. The beast isn't real they cam at me and every one was on top of me my screams were tremulous. They wouldn't bealive me and i looked at the sky for my last sight of nature.
2 comments:
I liked how you describe what Simon finds out the beast is, and the conversation witht he Lord of the flies.
the beast can not be killed it is part of us the dark instinctual part of us. civilization has no control over you boys anymore you have giving into the the rules of the beast, and now we are going to do you in.
I though it was a very detailed, interesting way for Simon to describe the beast.
Can you describe why Simon decides to go up the hill after the beast? I think it would help the reader understand the story a bit more.
Well Daniel, i thought this was another good and thoughtful blog. I liked how you described the conversation a little bit with the LOTF. I could visualize what was going onl, but i would like maybe a little bit more detail.
Also again, some on the vocab words were used incorrectly.
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