"No it was not i insited it was only a acident how dare him for crawling up on us like that. "
"But we were on the out side weren't we."
" yea and the storm the lighting we wern't being right!"
We should not feel bad because we were not part of it don't worry. I thought to my self that jack is losing it he is giving in to the beast and to jacks power i can not stand for this.
"Ralph how are we going to keep the fire going?''
"What oh the fire we will split in to groups samneric and me and you one will atend the fire and the othere will be getting wood."
" but my asthma i can't haul logs!"
"Sucks to your asthma!''
But now how are we going to keep the fire going when my specs are gone. I shudder when i think about jack and what they will do to us. Last night was horible my face was smothered in hay and dirt when they left. I was so scared i layed on the ground and had a asthma atack.
i could hear Ralph's stifled scream when he got hit in the pill's. when he was fighting i saw him gesticulating by using his ands and punching jack as he thought.
2 comments:
I liked how you used smothered, it was a very descriptive sentence.
Last night was horible my face was smothered in hay and dirt when they left. I was so scared i layed on the ground and had a asthma atack
Could you describe Smaneric and their reaction to talking about Simons murder? How did they act, when Ralph and Piggy talked ot them about the party.
Daniel, I liked how you added some of the dislodge from the book, for the reader to understand more.
All the vocab words were correct and they were all really descriptive sentences.
I agree with zoe how she asked about how did sam and eric's reaction to Piggy and Ralph taking about simon's death?
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