Wednesday, January 30, 2008
blog 2 The fire of hope
I walked up slowly and carefully. While grasping the conch as if it was my life the other kids nimble up the mountain with a swift and smooth movement. When the boy's got to the top of the mountain i was about have way and i started to pant like a dog. But i saw the boy's gather warped wood and put in a triangluar shape but could not start a fire. when i got there the sun made a bright glance in my eyes and i shut my eyes from the bright sun and. That second jack ripped my spectacles off my face. The i could see ralph and the others slightly tilt my glasses so the sun's heat was magnified. Then i saw a some smoke and it quickly turned into a fire with the boys could barley keep it maintained with out it catching the whole island on fire. Then ralph gave me my spectacles back and when i put them back on i glared at him giving me a scornfully look and having my spectacles back gave me a irresistible erg of power i must do something or this fire is going to get out of hand. since i had the conch i thought i had the power to speak but every time i told them some thing all they said was
" shut up piggy."
"shut up fatty."
"shut up"
But i didn't i keep on trying to stop the fire but they all thought it was a fire of hope they thought as long as the fire is going there is hope for civilization. I tried to be officious but they would not listen no matter what. Then my spectacles blur up again as the boys make a tumult and i see the orange fire spred to a tree and i say
" there needs to be more order in this place or we will fall apart"
Monday, January 28, 2008
blog 1 who has the power
The fat boy vainly yelled at the kid in front of him while they both clambered on the shore towards a a big warm lagoon where they both swam and showered off in. Then the fat boy found a conch and they both speculated an idea on how they can gather the other boys from the island but the fat boy was jumbling his ideas on how he ended up on this island and where they the only ones on the island what happened to the pilot where are we? the fat boy asked the others boys name and he said ralph and then ralph asked the fat boy of his name and he said it while he became paloor and started to quiver i said piggy but please don't tell any one ralph made a clamour of noise while he was laughing at his name when ralph blew the conch little kids started to apearing ouy of the grating forest minutes of the first blow of the conch but he kept on making the sound and they kept interposed between our conversation and asking what we are doing here how did we get here a little boy simon even brought me a cocunt and i devoured it so fast because i was hungry. more and more kids apeared behind the grating forest ntill there were at least 40 kids and they where acting in a decourus and indidgnation the kids made a strident sound arguing over the the leader but i think that piggy should be the leader because he is the most intalectual
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